This blog is a record of my learning from Primary School through to College.
We have been learning a lot about poem. We each wrote a poem.
Wow, Maria that is a really good poem. I really like your word selection. Keep up the great work.
Hello Maria, Outstanding work! I enjoyed the way you rhymed your words smoothly. I also enjoyed seeing you use of the onomatopoeia. ' SWEESH ,SWOOSH ' What type of poem's do you like writing, what culture are you?Uinita
Heyy Maria, this is some good work you've published here. A lot of description and heaps of cool sentences. Well Done :))By Soane
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Wow, Maria that is a really good poem. I really like your word selection. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHello Maria, Outstanding work! I enjoyed the way you rhymed your words smoothly. I also enjoyed seeing you use of the onomatopoeia. ' SWEESH ,SWOOSH '
ReplyDeleteWhat type of poem's do you like writing, what culture are you?
Uinita
Heyy Maria, this is some good work you've published here. A lot of description and heaps of cool sentences. Well Done :))
ReplyDeleteBy Soane